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« Reply #40 on Apr 18, 2009, 3:25am »

Can you imagine the conflict i would face if Jen wanted Wyatt too? It would be awful. I would win, of course, by it would be a tough battle for sure.

And PHOTWU is a great club. Honestly, i had forgotten what it stood for besides knowing it had to do with hating people. haha. It's nice to know again.
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« Reply #41 on Apr 20, 2009, 8:41am »

Chris is really beautiful but when I think of Wyatt coming out from the shadows in Chris Crossed...he is too sexy, I am always dying for jumping in the attic to catch him
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« Reply #42 on Apr 20, 2009, 1:20pm »

Stormy, Stormy, Stormy, why must you always believe you could win against me? I am much to deceptive to lose.
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« Reply #43 on May 8, 2009, 2:24am »

A war for Wyatt? I'm sorry Jen, but my love for Wyatt would surpass your hypothetical one. For sure.

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« Reply #44 on May 8, 2009, 6:10am »

Because I play dirty. Come on Storm, I'm ready for war.

Not really, but it sounded like a good time. But honestly I'm too exhausted to fight for him, he's yours, I prefer Chris anyway.
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« Reply #45 on May 10, 2009, 11:14pm »

I'm going to try to have the review up by tonight (my tonight anyways...), but by the rate i'm going maybe tomorrow. Which makes me sad because I was sure I would be done by now.

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« Reply #46 on May 10, 2009, 11:15pm »

I can just imagine it. You and Storm, facing each other in armed combat, just for Wyatt...
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« Reply #47 on May 12, 2009, 8:14pm »

Oh Stormy, how I adore you. I loved the review and I even loved you trashing one of my characters that I've worked very hard in developing. (I'm not scolding you. No really I'm not.) But I adored the review and now I can start on the next chapter knowing that Stormy has reviewed and she's depressed about Andy's beautiful dress. It's a really really pretty dress, I picked it out. Honestly. lol

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« Reply #48 on May 13, 2009, 8:49am »

I think that the red dress is suitable for Andy, a light red is fine on a blonde and she doesn't seem fat,Wyatt doesn't think so, Stormy faces facts, you cannot stop this romantic date
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« Reply #49 on May 13, 2009, 2:36pm »

Stormy can't stop it... but one can be sure that DEMONS will try to!

Storm, loved the review. I laughed out loud and luckily remembered not to be drinking anything while reading it. If I had been, my caffeine free Coke would've been spewed across my laptop. That wouldn't have been good.

As for Dads and guns? Yes. They actually do that kind of thing, or at least I've heard about various similar encounters from friends (luckily not dates -- my Dad never owned a gun) on the "hazing ritual" that fathers do to their daughter's dates. It supposedly is particularly bad when the date happens to be something like a Prom. One of my friend's dads was a cop. One of our other friends and her started dating -- he took her to prom -- her Dad was sitting at the table cleaning his gun when Chris (yes, that was his name) came to pick her up.

The mental image of a Mom doing that has me smiling wickedly. I fully intend to be this kind of mother and put the "Mommy Dearest" fear into the hearts of young teenage boys courting my daughter (or teenage girls courting my son if I have one of those one day). Only... I'll be sitting on the couch polishing my Katana. Fear me. I am a Mom with a shiny, sharp sword... and I know how to use it.
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« Reply #50 on May 13, 2009, 8:01pm »


May 12, 2009, 8:14pm, strikermac wrote:
It's a really really pretty dress, I picked it out. Honestly. lol


That's just a testimony to how badly she must look if such a pretty dress could make her look hideous. And it does make her look hideous. It does. IT DOES!
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« Reply #51 on Aug 4, 2009, 7:34pm »

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Let me take this time to tell you that I missed you horribly, and that if I have to put Wyatt in danger every episode to get you back here, I will. Yes, each episode I'll have Wyatt just moments away from death.

Oh no, even worse, he and Andy together, making out in the hall at school, making out in his truck, making out in his bedroom, making out everywhere, see I can play rough when I have to Storm. Bring it on baby. You ignore me and you have to deal with the consequences.

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« Reply #52 on Aug 5, 2009, 1:36am »

Stormy I like orange but it's tiring to read on the brown setting
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« Reply #53 on Aug 8, 2009, 1:53am »

haha. Sorry about the orange. Seeing as you can have different backgrounds I sometimes don't realize what works and what doesn't. And well, I love orange.

And Jen, what you're suggesting is cruel and usual. It pains me to even read about. You wouldn't really do that to me, would you? :( But... but... i lovers you! Just think about the cruelty of your actions! Oh, and I am working on the next review... I'll try not to take forever.
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« Reply #54 on Aug 8, 2009, 3:00pm »

The orange looks great on the black background, fyi.

And yes, I would indeed be that cruel. You know me better than to ask that question. Plus, you know the story has to progress. Despite your love for Wyatt, he is currently infatuated with Andy.
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Oh, another review? {bounces up and down then does the bunny dance} Yippeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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« Reply #55 on Aug 18, 2009, 2:09pm »

Orange looks great on the black screen with the blue border. I'm partial to black, it is my favorite color, or non-color as the case may be. See if I had any talent whatsoever, I'd have my "skin" still creepy fyi, it would be black, teal or aqua border and that picture of Chris in the leather jacket on the top. My world would be relatively perfect. Well, not perfect until I won the Powerball and was able to write full time, but close enough. But I digress. The orange is fine.

*My cousins Kenny and Alan used to bring home animals all the time. They were both older than me, much actually. But whenever you went to their house there was always a new cat around. Then one of them brought home the sweetest dog ever. Her name was Kayiak. Oh I still miss her, you could use her as a pillow and she'd lay there forever. The one cat had kittens and she took each and every one of them and tried to feed them. She wanted puppies so bad, but she'd been spade. It was so sad. But the kittens loved her despite the fact that she couldn't feed them. Momma cat, not so happy though. lol

FYI, Phoenix in the house, could be messy and interesting at the same time.

* Books, I've always had a love for books. Started reading at four and fell in love with the library. Won a read-a-thon in second grade. Good times. Though I haven't quite worked my way up to the type of books six year Chris is reading, but someday, maybe I'll get into time travel. No that wasn't the book he was drawn to, come on that's an easy one. Can anyone guess the book he was drawn to that day?

*The broken purr is a tactic used by small kittens to get people to totally fall in love with them. I've had three who have used this tactic and it has worked every time. Only my oldest cat, Striker didn't use this tactic. Instead he used the attack and ask questions later tactic. Which did not make him very popular in my house all the time. But damn do I miss the little furball.
*Timing is everything.


"Who's going to feed her?"

"I will."

"And play with her?"

"I will."

"And who will change her litter box?"

"Wyatt will." Leo laughed despite himself. His youngest son was quick; always had been.


*I personally thought this was my best scene in the whole chapter. Come on the kid has timing, don't you just want to eat him up?

*Okay, I must admit that sometimes when I'm reading your reviews I laugh hysterically. My mother looks at me as if I've grown another head. Which makes me wonder if it is appropriate to laugh at the computer screen. Though I've been known to read a book and laugh or cry during certain scenes. Even when writing sometimes you need to hold onto the Kleenex (not only does this board advertise Cheetos for free we are also open to advertising Kleenex; shouldn't we get paid for this?) box just in case. So I see no problem awwwing over the said kitten and little Chris. But note: others who have not read any of these stories will not understand and will look at you as if you are ready to be put in the psych ward.
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*Stormy what have I told you about this being a family show? We can not discuss Chris who is only now sixteen having quickies. It's inappropriate. Geez...

*Wouldn't that suck to have an uncle who is a cupid and an aunt who is an empath? Though I think Chris will be putting up massive barriers against them having unwanted info.


Kay, kay… wait. I’m a tad confused/curious/not100%sure. Chris is worried about Coop telling Phoebe about Katina? Chris is worried about Coop telling Phoebe about his “fun times” with other girl(s)? Chris is worried about Coop telling Phoebe about him wanting to have “fun times” with other girls? all of the above?

*This is Chris Stormy, we haven't shown you everything about him. What you don't know or anyone else know is that secretly he's been... *&%%#@#(*&)(_+_+()(^%#$#@#@!#@!$#^*&
lol No but seriously, I'll give you a little flashback soon to let everyone know why Chris is a tad on the freaked out side.

*Of course that's what they call them these days, do you have another term you'd like to offer up? Just remember this is a family show. lol

Answers from Katina:

1) Yes, I've been a female since before birth and was born in November.

2) I do not have any allergies, sorry. Though I do have a sever dislike for liver.

3) No tattoos (She smiles wickedly, putting a finger to her lips) ...yet.

4) How hot do I find Chris? On a scale of one to ten I find it insulting that you only gave him a fifty. In my thinking the number should be much much higher. Possibly as high as a million give or take a number.

5) No ex-boyfriends, I'm not allowed to date, yet.

6) Favorite book? Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............................. I can't tell you that. Not that I don't want to, well no I don't want to. No answer will be given at this current time. My reading interests are varied though.

7) Pink is my favorite color. (Though she looks spectacular in orange, just ask Chris.)

8) My favorite food is pizza, though its really close to the right answer since it does have cheese on it as well. But if I were standing in a store looking for snack food of course I'd walk in and pick up.........Doritos, (she laughs,) no but really of course I'd pick up a bag of Cheetos. They are by far the best snack food on any continent, and the way they make your fingers orange. {sighs}

[Commercial voice] Cheetos is the official snack food of choice of the Destined: The Charmed Sons and all characters of this site.

9) Intentions? Other than savagely ravaging him, for he has a hotness rating of around a million out of ten, my intentions are to see him again. Considering the fact that I live in Europe and he lives in North America, I'm thinking chances of this are pretty slim. I just found out how much I hates geography. (Seriously, could you imagine meeting someone you find interesting physically and mentally; then finding out they live on a different continent, how devastating would that be?) Currently I'm trying to determine how to get my father transferred to San Francisco. But only so I can follow through on my intentions.

10) Of course I lovers Stormy weather, who doesn't? All that electricity in the air, just revs up all emotions. The wind cleanses you and then the rain. Seriously who doesn't lovers a good Storm? (Expecting a storm here soon, if I can't finish that is why.)

Can't wait to answer some more of your questions sometime.

Katina Adelsvaard
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*First may I start out by saying that you are taking so much time slamming Andy that you forget that eventually they break up. Deep breath sweetheart. Have a Cheeto.

*Also had a senior banquet. They hired a magician. Really, can you say lame? I'll try to make theirs non-lame. Could be interesting to have a senior dinner with a show. lol Demons attacking and the kids think its an act that D.J. and Wyatt put together. lol lol lol

*If you marry Wyatt now Storm, your children are going to be slaves to Halliwell's; is that what you really want for your children. Maybe you should reconsider. {shrugs}

P.S. I almost caused Shannon's death by reading. She just happened to be reading something I wrote and almost choked to death on breakfast. Oddly enough, if my work was the last thing that you ever read, I think I'd feel quite honored. Sad of course, losing someone as awesome as you and all. But honored. The police would show up and confiscate my computer asking about the writing and oh all the possibilities. Isn't it kinda cool to think about though? But them I'm a little odd.

*Geez Storm, chill, its not like I'm about to nearly kill him again or anything during this episode.
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*Wouldn't that be cool if your books could change their text?

*D.J. and the Book of Shadows. Could do an entire story on the book harassing D.J. and never get tired of it.
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Men in black, shadowy figures, eerie mists, anyone sensing a trend here?

*Chris kinda focuses on something and everything else melts away. Unfortunately getting hit by a car isn't something that will melt away. Considering he just got back into fighting shape after the football injury you'd think he'd be a bit more careful.



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